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Assignment 12.1

Assignment 12.1

Q Find one news article from this week to analyze for conciseness. Check out an article from The New York Times, The Baltimore Sun, The Washington Post, etc. and see if you can catch a reporter who is guilty of being a little wordy. It happens! Part 2: Choose a sentence or two to rephrase and include the original sentence and your rewritten sentence in your post. Also include details such as a link to the story, the title and author of the story, and a brief summary of the story.

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The article discusses how a hip fractured patient is vulnerable to more fractures in future and why it is the responsibility of the patient more than the physician to take that it does not occur again. It highlights that those who fracture because of non-severe trauma reasons like car crash and rather from falling down or being careless are prone to greater risks of repeating fractures. One of the most seer case for the same is that in spite of numerous and inexpensive treatments being available, most people do not continue treatment for the necessary amount of time, and thus remain largely exposed.